Thursday, March 31, 2011

Midterm corrections

  • there is a line in the beginning of the movie in the fade in
  • take st, ave, and rd out of signs
  • the other work sign should be moved above the horizon
  • descriptor for other work is problematic
  • Who's Controlling You should have a question mark
  • different font in the beginning
  • religion scene is too fast and need to be more readable
  • blood should run down screen
  • in the swallow or gulf in 3rd scene should be more expressive

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