- there is a line in the beginning of the movie in the fade in
- take st, ave, and rd out of signs
- the other work sign should be moved above the horizon
- descriptor for other work is problematic
- Who's Controlling You should have a question mark
- different font in the beginning
- religion scene is too fast and need to be more readable
- blood should run down screen
- in the swallow or gulf in 3rd scene should be more expressive
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