Things that need to happen

phone too loud

start on zoom in

woman has no hair

dump girl ear is odd

record scratch is fast

dump girl should be more annoying

dump man has different shirt on

Self Critique for final first draft

Intent: address possible and farfetched relationship problems while using a similar structure to robot chicken
synopsis: A number of different scenarios occur dealing with relationship issues.
Changes or things to work on: Better title and perhaps a better way to close it.

Storyboard

Revised Logline

Things spiral out of control when we see what people will do in relationship and sex problems.

Story 1. Couple has sex, only for woman to find out afterwards that the man didn't use condom.

Story 2. Woman uses witch kraft to attract man only to find out later that he gives her aids.

Story 3. Boyfriend gets dumped by girlfriend, but he leaves her in the dumpster in an alley.

Story 4. Woman stands in line of seamen donor line.

Proposal for Final

1. 
   
   My final project focuses on the effect that a failing economy has over the decisions of people.


2. Different scenarios in which individuals are affected by economy will be presented. These scenes will by encased in a television that is in the form of a domino. I will change from scene to scene in a drastic manner. In one particular scenario, a man works at mcdonalds after losing a high paid job and takes the position before his daughter can get it. At the end of the scenarios, the dominos will fall after being pushed by the economy.


3. The failing economy has an effect on everyone.


4. The content will switch from screen to screen as if people’s lives were only scenarios, but these are actual events that can and have happened. The domino will emphasize the overall theme of how one event affects the next.
Storm Trooper

Gummy Bear

TV Static

Call of Duty

PS3

The Race

The Car

5.

6. Set-up: I establish failing economy by first scene when stock market drops and man is fired.

conflict: scenarios end badly for these characters

resolve: There isn't a peaceful resolve but the dominos at the end make the connection with all of the events that I show.