Things that need to change
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Kim Jong-il picture should be smoother
Walk of shame is too slow
South Korea should be better aligned
Korean flag should possibly go on shirt
Look more Korean
Audio
Video game music
Make more a video game theme
Cut between second and third scene is a bit slow
Surprised look after intranet is problem – make different web page
Change name of Google
In the early scenes he should walk into the grass and then get shot – maybe have someone yelling no walking on grass or have words that come up and say you loose a life
He gets shot in intranet room and blood scatters on screen
Gets wound by religious gate
Have a sign that says you have a freedom to religion
As he is walking he should have a blood trail
He should die at the end
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